addressed blocking issues

Author: joannapea

articles/data-share/how-to-monitor.md

@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
 ---
-title: How to monitor my Azure Data Share Preview
-description: How to monitor my Azure Data Share Preview
+title: How to monitor Azure Data Share Preview
+description: How to monitor Azure Data Share Preview
 author: joannapea
 
 ms.service: data-share
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.date: 07/10/2019
 ms.author: joanpo
 ---
-# Monitoring my Azure Data Share Preview 
+# Monitor Azure Data Share Preview 
 
 This article explains how you can monitor your data shares using Azure Data Share Preview. As a data provider, you are able to monitor various aspects of your data sharing relationships. Details such as whether your data consumers have accepted your invitation to the data share, as well as whether they have created a share subscription and started to use your data are all available to monitor. 
 
@@ -20,11 +20,11 @@ View the status of your data share invitations by navigating to Sent shares -> I
 
 ![Invitation status](./media/invitation-status.png "Invitation status") 
 
-There are 3 states that your invitation can be in:
+There are three states that your invitation can be in:
 
-1. Pending - Data share recipient has not yet accepted the invitation
-1. Accepted - Data share recipient has accepted the invitation
-1. Rejected - Data share recipient has rejected the invitation 
+* Pending - Data share recipient has not yet accepted the invitation.
+* Accepted - Data share recipient has accepted the invitation.
+* Rejected - Data share recipient has rejected the invitation.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > If you delete an invitation after it has already been accepted, it is not equivalent to revoking access. If you would like to stop future snapshots from being copied into your data consumers storage account, you must revoke access through the *Share subscriptions* tab. 
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ View the status of your share subscriptions by navigating to Sent Shares -> Shar
 
 In the history tab, you are able to view the snapshots that have been copied in to your data consumer's tenant. You are able to monitor the frequency and duration of each snapshot interval. 
 
-![Snapshit history](./media/sent-shares.png "Snapshot history") 
+![Snapshot history](./media/sent-shares.png "Snapshot history") 
 
 You can view more details about each snapshot run by clicking on the run start date. 
 

articles/data-share/index.yml

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ### YamlMime:YamlDocument
 documentType: LandingData
-title: Azure Data Share Preview Documentation
+title: Azure Data Share Preview documentation
 metadata:
-  title: Azure Data Share Preview Documentation - Tutorials, how to guides
+  title: Azure Data Share Preview documentation - Tutorials, how-to guides
   description: Azure Data Share Preview is a safe and secure service for sharing data with third-party organizations.
   author: joannapea
   ms.author: joanpo
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ sections:
         src: /azure/data-share/media/index/portal.svg
       text: Troubleshoot Azure Data Share
       href: /azure/data-share/data-share-troubleshoot
-- title: Step-by-Step Tutorials
+- title: Step-by-Step tutorials
   items:
   - type: paragraph
     text: 'Learn how to start sharing your data using Azure Data Share'

articles/data-share/media/invitation-status.png

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.author: joanpo
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 # What is Azure Data Share Preview?
 
-In today world, data is viewed as a key strategic asset that many organizations need to simply and securely share with their customers and partners. There are many ways that customers do this today, including through FTP, e-mail, APIs to name a few. Organizations can easily lose track of who they've shared their data with. Sharing data through FTP or through standing up their own API infrastructure is often expensive to provision and administer. There's management overhead associated with using these methods of sharing on a large scale. 
+In today's world, data is viewed as a key strategic asset that many organizations need to simply and securely share with their customers and partners. There are many ways that customers do this today, including through FTP, e-mail, APIs to name a few. Organizations can easily lose track of who they've shared their data with. Sharing data through FTP or through standing up their own API infrastructure is often expensive to provision and administer. There's management overhead associated with using these methods of sharing on a large scale. 
 
 Many organizations need to be accountable for the data that they have shared. In addition to accountability, many organizations would like to be able to control, manage, and monitor all of their data sharing in a simple way. In today world, where data is expected to continue to grow at an exponential pace, organizations need a simple way to share big data. Customers demand the most up-to-date data to ensure that they are able to derive timely insights.