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articles/devtest-labs/media/tutorial-create-custom-lab/portal-lab-vm-advanced-settings.png

@@ -2,18 +2,18 @@
 title: "Tutorial: Create a lab"
 description: Use the Azure portal to create a lab, create a virtual machine in the lab, and add a lab user in Azure DevTest Labs.
 ms.topic: tutorial
-ms.date: 03/29/2022
+ms.date: 03/30/2022
 ---
 
 # Tutorial: Set up a lab in DevTest Labs by using the Azure portal
 
 In this Azure DevTest Labs tutorial, you learn how to:
 
 > [!div class="checklist"]
-> * Create a lab in DevTest Labs
-> * Add an Azure virtual machine (VM) to the lab
-> * Add a user in the DevTest Labs User role
-> * Delete the lab when no longer needed
+> * Create a lab in DevTest Labs.
+> * Add an Azure virtual machine (VM) to the lab.
+> * Add a user in the DevTest Labs User role.
+> * Delete the lab when no longer needed.
 
 In the [next tutorial](tutorial-use-custom-lab.md), lab users, such as developers, testers, and trainees, access the lab and claim, connect to, and unclaim lab VMs.
 
@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ To add a VM to the lab, follow these steps. For more information, see [Create la
 1. On the **Basic Settings** tab of the **Create lab resource** screen, provide the following information:
 
    - **Virtual machine name**: Keep the autogenerated name, or enter another unique VM name.
-   - **User name**: Keep the user name, or enter another user name to grant administrator privileges on the VM.
-   - **Use a saved secret**: Select this checkbox to use a secret from Azure Key Vault instead of a password to access the VM. If you select this option, under **Secret**, select the secret to use from the dropdown list. For more information, see [Store secrets in a key vault](devtest-lab-store-secrets-in-key-vault.md). 
-   - **Password**: If you don't choose to use a secret, enter a VM password between 8 and 123 characters long.
+   - **User name**: Keep the autogenerated user name, or enter another user name to grant administrator privileges on the VM.
+   - **Use a saved secret**: You can select this checkbox to use a secret from Azure Key Vault instead of a password to access the VM. For more information, see [Store secrets in a key vault](devtest-lab-store-secrets-in-key-vault.md). For this tutorial, don't select the checkbox.
+   - **Password**: If you don't use a secret, enter a VM password between 8 and 123 characters long.
    - **Save as default password**: Select this checkbox to save the password in the Key Vault associated with the lab.
-   - **Virtual machine size**: Keep the default value for the base, or select **Change Size** to select different sizes.
+   - **Virtual machine size**: Keep the default value for the base, or select **Change Size** to select a different size.
    - **OS disk type**: Keep the default value for the base, or select a different option from the dropdown list.
-   - **Artifacts**: This field shows the number of artifacts configured for this VM base. Optionally, select **Add or Remove Artifacts** to [select and configure artifacts](devtest-lab-add-vm.md#add-artifacts-during-installation) to add to the VM.
+   - **Artifacts**: Optionally, select **Add or Remove Artifacts** to [select and configure artifacts](devtest-lab-add-vm.md#add-artifacts-during-installation) to add to the VM.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-create-custom-lab/portal-lab-vm-basic-settings.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Basic Settings tab of the Create lab resource page.":::
 
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ Use this lab for the next tutorial, [Access a lab in Azure DevTest Labs](tutoria
 
 If you created the lab in an existing resource group, deleting the lab removes all of the lab resources.
 
-If you created a resource group for the lab, you can now delete that resource group. You can't delete a resource group that has a lab in it. Deleting the resource group that contained the lab deletes all resources in the resource group.
+If you created a resource group for the lab, you can now delete that resource group. You can't delete a resource group that has a lab in it. Deleting the resource group that contained the lab deletes all resources in the resource group. To delete the resource group:
 
 1. Select the resource group that contained the lab from your subscription's **Resource groups** list.
 1. At the top of the page, select **Delete resource group**.

articles/devtest-labs/media/tutorial-use-custom-lab/my-virtual-machines-2.png

@@ -2,17 +2,18 @@
 title: Access a lab and lab VM
 description: Learn how to access a lab in Azure DevTest Labs, and claim, connect to, and unclaim a lab virtual machine.
 ms.topic: tutorial
-ms.date: 03/29/2021
+ms.date: 03/30/2021
 ---
 
 # Tutorial: Access a lab in Azure DevTest Labs
 
 In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 
 > [!div class="checklist"]
-> * Claim a lab virtual machine (VM) in Azure DevTest Labs
-> * Connect to the lab VM
-> * Unclaim the lab VM
+> * Claim a lab virtual machine (VM) in Azure DevTest Labs.
+> * Connect to the lab VM.
+> * Unclaim the lab VM.
+> * Delete the lab VM when no longer needed.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -28,11 +29,11 @@ To claim a lab VM, follow these steps. You automatically have [Owner](/azure/rol
 
 1. On the lab **Overview** page, select **Claimable virtual machines** under **My Lab** in the left navigation.
 
-1. On the **Claimable virtual machines** page, select the **...** (ellipsis) next to the listing for a claimable VM, and select **Claim machine** from the context menu.
+1. On the **Claimable virtual machines** page, select the ellipsis **...**  next to the listing for an available VM, and select **Claim machine** from the context menu.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-use-custom-lab/claimable-virtual-machines-claimed.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing Claim machine in the context menu.":::
 
-1. On the lab **Overview** page, confirm that you now see the VM in the list under **My virtual machines**, and that the VM is starting up.
+1. On the lab **Overview** page, confirm that you now see the VM in the list under **My virtual machines**.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-use-custom-lab/my-virtual-machines-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the claimed V M in the My virtual machines list.":::
 
@@ -80,7 +81,7 @@ After you're done using the VM, unclaim the VM so someone else can claim it, by
 
 When you're done using a VM, you can delete it. Or, the lab owner can delete the entire lab when it's no longer needed, which deletes all lab VMs and resources. To delete an individual lab VM, follow these steps:
 
-1. Select the **...** (ellipsis) next to the VM in the **My virtual machines** list or on the **Claimable virtual machines** page, and select **Delete** from the context menu.
+1. Select the ellipsis **...** next to the VM in the **My virtual machines** list or on the **Claimable virtual machines** page, and select **Delete** from the context menu.
 
 1. On the **Are you sure you want to delete it** page, select **Delete**.