Add images, address PR comments

Author: Sam Cedarbaum

articles/stream-analytics/blob-output-managed-identity.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ This article shows you how to enable Managed Identity for the Blob output(s) of
 
 1. Create a new Stream Analytics job or open an existing job in the Azure portal. From the menu bar located on the left side of the screen, select **Managed Identity** located under **Configure**. Ensure that "Use System-assigned Managed Identity" is selected and then click the **Save** button on the bottom of the screen.
 
-   ![Configure Stream Analytics managed identity](./media/stream-analytics-managed-identities-blob-output-preview/stream-analytics-enable-managed-identity.png)
+   ![Configure Stream Analytics managed identity](./media/common/stream-analytics-enable-managed-identity.png)
 
 2. In the output properties window of the Azure Blob storage output sink, select the Authentication mode drop-down and choose **Managed Identity**. For information regarding the other output properties, see [Understand outputs from Azure Stream Analytics](./stream-analytics-define-outputs.md). When you are finished, click **Save**.
 

articles/stream-analytics/media/common/stream-analytics-enable-managed-identity.png

@@ -10,31 +10,33 @@ ms.date: 10/18/2019
 
 # Use Managed Identity to authenticate your Azure Stream Analytics job to Power BI (Preview)
 
-[Managed Identity authentication](../active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/overview.md) for output to Power BI is now available for Azure Stream Analytics as a preview. This gives Stream Analytics jobs direct access to a workspace within your Power BI account. This feature allows for deployments of Stream Analytics jobs to be fully automated, since it is no longer required for a user to interactively login via the Azure Portal.
+[Managed Identity authentication](../active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/overview.md) for output to Power BI is available for Azure Stream Analytics as a preview. This gives Stream Analytics jobs direct access to a workspace within your Power BI account. This feature allows for deployments of Stream Analytics jobs to be fully automated, since it is no longer required for a user to interactively login to Power BI via the Azure Portal. Additionally, long running jobs that write to Power BI are now better supported, since you will not need to periodically re-authorize the job.
 
 This article shows you how to enable Managed Identity for the Power BI output(s) of a Stream Analytics job through the Azure portal and through an Azure Resource Manager deployment.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 The following are required for using this feature:
 
-1. A Power BI account with a Pro license
+1. A Power BI account with a [Pro license](https://docs.microsoft.com/power-bi/service-admin-purchasing-power-bi-pro).
 
 2. An upgraded workspace within your Power BI account. See [Power BI's announcement](https://powerbi.microsoft.com/en-us/blog/announcing-new-workspace-experience-general-availability-ga/) of this feature for more details.
 
 ## Create a Stream Analytics job using the Azure portal
 
-1. Create a new Stream Analytics job or open an existing job in the Azure portal. From the menu bar located on the left side of the screen, select **Managed Identity** located under **Configure**. Ensure that "Use System-assigned Managed Identity" is selected and then click the **Save** button on the bottom of the screen.
+1. Create a new Stream Analytics job or open an existing job in the Azure portal. From the menu bar located on the left side of the screen, select **Managed Identity** located under **Configure**. Ensure that "Use System-assigned Managed Identity" is selected and then select the **Save** button on the bottom of the screen.
 
-   ![Configure Stream Analytics managed identity](./media/stream-analytics-managed-identities-blob-output-preview/stream-analytics-enable-managed-identity.png)
+   ![Configure Stream Analytics managed identity](./media/common/stream-analytics-enable-managed-identity.png)
 
-2. In the output properties window of the Power BI output sink, select the Authentication mode drop-down and choose **Managed Identity**. For information regarding the other output properties, see [Understand outputs from Azure Stream Analytics](./stream-analytics-define-outputs.md). When you are finished, click **Save**.
+2. Before configuring the output, give the Stream Analytics job access to your Power BI workspace by following the directions in the [Give the Stream Analytics job access to your Power BI workspace](#give-the-stream-analytics-job-access-to-your-powerbi-workspace) section of this article.
 
-<!--
-    Image placeholder: photo of Power BI output blade.
--->
+3. Navigate to the **Outputs** section of your Stream Analytic's job, select **+ Add**, and then choose **Power BI**. Then, select the **Authorize** button and login with your Power BI account.
 
-3. Now that the job is created, see the [Give the Stream Analytics job access to your Power BI workspace](#give-the-stream-analytics-job-access-to-your-powerbi-workspace) section of this article.
+   ![Authorize with Power BI account](./media/stream-analytics-powerbi-output-managed-identity/stream-analytics-authorize-powerbi.png)
+
+4. Once authorized, a dropdown list will be populated with all of the workspaces you have access to. Select the workspace that you authorized in the previous step. Then select **Managed Identity** as the "Authentication mode". Finally, select the **Save** button.
+
+   ![Configure Power BI output with Managed Identity](./media/stream-analytics-powerbi-output-managed-identity/stream-analytics-configure-powerbi-with-managed-id.png)
 
 ## Azure Resource Manager deployment
 
@@ -77,7 +79,7 @@ Using Azure Resource Manager allows you to fully automate the deployment of your
                                     "properties":{
                                         "dataset": "dataset_name",
                                         "table": "table_name",
-                                        "groupId": "ae969eeb-e7a2-436e-aba3-851e948584bc",
+                                        "groupId": "01234567-89ab-cdef-0123-456789abcdef",
                                         "authenticationMode": "Msi"
                                     }
                                 }
@@ -99,31 +101,31 @@ Using Azure Resource Manager allows you to fully automate the deployment of your
 2. After the job is created, you can use Azure Resource Manager to retrieve the job's full definition.
 
     ```azurecli
-    az resource show --ids /subscriptions/{SUBSCRIPTION_ID}/resourceGroups/{RESOURCE_GROUP}/providers/Microsoft.StreamAnalytics/StreamingJobs/{RESOURCE_NAME}
+    az resource show --ids /subscriptions/<subsription-id>/resourceGroups/<resource-group>/providers/Microsoft.StreamAnalytics/StreamingJobs/<resource-name>
     ```
 
     The above command will return a response like the below:
 
     ```json
     {
-        "id": "/subscriptions/{SUBSCRIPTION_ID}/resourceGroups/{RESOURCE_GROUP}/providers/Microsoft.StreamAnalytics/streamingjobs/{RESOURCE_NAME}",
+        "id": "/subscriptions/<subscription-id>/resourceGroups/<resource-group>/providers/Microsoft.StreamAnalytics/streamingjobs/<resource-name>",
         "identity": {
-            "principalId": "{PRINCIPAL_ID}",
-            "tenantId": "{TENANT_ID}",
+            "principalId": "<principal-id>",
+            "tenantId": "<tenant-id>",
             "type": "SystemAssigned",
             "userAssignedIdentities": null
         },
         "kind": null,
         "location": "West US",
         "managedBy": null,
-        "name": "{RESOURCE_NAME}",
+        "name": "<resource-name>",
         "plan": null,
         "properties": {
             "compatibilityLevel": "1.0",
             "createdDate": "2019-07-12T03:11:30.39Z",
             "dataLocale": "en-US",
             "eventsLateArrivalMaxDelayInSeconds": 5,
-            "jobId": "{JOB_ID}",
+            "jobId": "<job-id>",
             "jobState": "Created",
             "jobStorageAccount": null,
             "jobType": "Cloud",
@@ -134,49 +136,41 @@ Using Azure Resource Manager allows you to fully automate the deployment of your
                 "name": "Standard"
             }
         },
-        "resourceGroup": "{RESOURCE_GROUP}",
+        "resourceGroup": "<resource-group>",
         "sku": null,
         "tags": null,
         "type": "Microsoft.StreamAnalytics/streamingjobs"
     }
     ```
 
-   Take note of the **principalId** from the job's definition, which identifies your job's Managed Identity within Azure Active Directory and will be used in the next step to grant the Stream Analytics job access to the storage account.
-
 3. Now that the job is created, see the [Give the Stream Analytics job access to your Power BI workspace](#give-the-stream-analytics-job-access-to-your-powerbi-workspace) section of this article.
 
 
 ## Give the Stream Analytics job access to your Power BI workspace
 
-### Grant access via Power BI portal
+Now that the Stream Analytics job has been created, it can be given access to a Power BI workspace.
 
-
-1. Navigate to the Workspace's access settings.
+1. Navigate to the workspace's access settings. See this article for more details: [Give access to your workspace](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/power-bi/service-create-the-new-workspaces#give-access-to-your-workspace).
 
 2. Type the name of your Stream Analytics job in the text box and select **Contributor** as the access level.
 
-3. Click **Add** and close the pane.
-
-<!--
-    Image placeholder: Photo of Power BI ACL page.
--->
-
+3. Select **Add** and close the pane.
 
-### Grant access via the command line
+   ![Add Stream Analytics job to Power BI workspace](./media/stream-analytics-powerbi-output-managed-identity/stream-analytics-add-job-to-powerbi-workspace.png)
 
-**TODO**
 
 ## Limitations
-Below are the current limitations of this feature:
+Below are the limitations of this feature:
 
-1. Classic Power BI workspaces
+1. Classic Power BI workspaces are not supported.
 
 2. Azure accounts without Azure Active Directory.
 
 3. Multi-tenant access is not supported. The Service principal created for a given Stream Analytics job must reside in the same Azure Active Directory tenant in which the job was created, and cannot be used with a resource that resides in a different Azure Active Directory tenant.
 
-4. [User Assigned Identity](../active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/overview.md) is not supported. This means the user is not able to enter their own service principal to be used by their Stream Analytics job. The service principal must be generated by Azure Stream Analytics.
+4. [User Assigned Identity](../active-directory/managed-identities-azure-resources/overview.md) is not supported. This means you are not able to enter your own service principal to be used by their Stream Analytics job. The service principal must be generated by Azure Stream Analytics.
 
 ## Next steps
 
+* [Power BI dashboard integration with Azure Stream Analytics](./stream-analytics-power-bi-dashboard.md)
 * [Understand outputs from Azure Stream Analytics](./stream-analytics-define-outputs.md)